Twisted (A Hellflame and Frontman C Production)

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    Luke

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    Hey everyone here's the deal. Frontman C posted some lyrics earlier and I really liked them so I asked him if it would be cool to do a little collaberation of lyrics. In a few hours this is what we came up with. Enjoy. :)

    Twisted

    Another burning tear runs down her cheek
    She’s trying to hold on but she feels so weak
    She really can't think of what hurts worse
    His fist, his belt or simply his words
    No turning back now or moving on
    She’s stuck in a world where she can’t belong
    She’s so scared and she can’t comprehend the pain
    She’s living in a world where it all feels so strange
    One movement too quick, one breath out of line
    He’s there with that glare in his demonic eyes
    And at the end of the day when it's all done and said
    It's quiestionable whether she'll be alive or dead

    For every tear that’s been shed
    For all the blood on your hands
    For every sick little thing you’ve done
    To make yourself feel more like a man
    I swear that until the day that I die
    I’ll make you pay for every silent cry
    And as I’m standing here on the cold bathroom tiles
    The mirror doesn’t lie to your cold twisted smile

    In the corner she tries to hide for the time being
    But she knows he'll find her eventualy
    She keeps telling herself 'it'll get better soon'
    As he succeeds in deepening every single one of her wounds
    Each bruise, each cut and every piece of her broken heart
    And every action drives them further apart
    She tries to claw her way back into his arms
    Willingly returning to his regime of harm
    Just so she’d have someone, anyone at all
    But in her mind she’s counting each day she falls
    Everyday she falls further into sorrow
    The question is will she even be here tomorrow?

    For every tear that’s been shed
    For all the blood on your hands
    For every sick little thing you’ve done
    To make yourself feel more like a man
    I swear that until the day that I die
    I’ll make you pay for every silent cry
    And as I’m standing here on the cold bathroom tiles
    The mirror doesn’t lie to your cold twisted smile

    And I want just another glance
    Another look at your bleeding hands
    Before I can grasp them and pull you away
    Save you from myself, then I'll make me pay
    Make me suffer for what I've done
    I know you think it's sick...to me...it's simply fun

    For every tear that’s been shed
    For all the blood on your hands
    For every sick little thing you’ve done
    To make yourself feel more like a man
    I swear that until the day that I die
    I’ll make you pay for every silent cry
    And as I’m standing here on the cold bathroom tiles
    The mirror doesn’t lie to your cold twisted smile


    I think we did quite well, wouldn't you agree Frontman C?
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Woo-effin-hoo...this was a lot o' fun ^_^

    really glad it turned out like this...oh and...most credit's going to Hellflame there...he rewrote the verses and came up with his very own part...awesomeness thanks to him^_^
     
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    Luke

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    Na man you came up with the entire concept of the lyrics, I just added to them :lol:
     
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    Seinfeld

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    and made them the dopeness they are now ^_^...call it even?
     
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    Yeah yeah :lol:
     
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    That's some sweet ass lyrics right there :lol:


    But really, they are amazing. Good job guys :)
     
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    Luke

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    Dave, never refer to anythying associated with myself as 'Sweet Ass' :lol:
     
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    :lol: Okay. Never again xD
     
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    That's absolutely brilliant. :D You should do stuff like this together more often.
     
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    I think collaborative writing is an excellent idea, actually.
     

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