Well here it is, thoughts on it please... Bleed Tonight I have no where to go, The world’s becoming numb, I’ll do what I want to do, I’m gonna do it right, Trying to figure out the ways, I’m gonna bleed tonight, And I would rather be, Anywhere but here, I love to see me bleed, Anywhere without fear, Laugh around with all my friends, Though I never have a dream, Take breaths as it starts to end, I’m making sure it’s right, I only need the one way, I’m gonna bleed tonight, And I would rather be, Anywhere but here, I love to see me bleed, Anywhere without fear, Yeah, yeah, yeah, It’s like this, Yeah, yeah, Just watch this, Yeah, yeah, Make another cut, Yeah, yeah, yeah I must bleed tonight, And I would rather be, Anywhere but here, I love to see me bleed, Anywhere without fear.
Coool,I liked this stuff very much,it has great rhythm in it,the words that you have used to express ur thoughts are really good,great keep it up.