Dream Scene

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    Luke

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    Roll the film once again
    That my mind cannot let go
    Play the scene and pretend
    This is not just for show
    We’re not falling for each other
    We’re falling off the face of the earth
    Pick me up just to let me go
    Tease my hope in every word

    Caught up in delusion
    Trapped within the dream
    Every single word you say
    Played out in every scene
    I dream away my life
    Because I can’t escape
    The fact that you’re not here with me
    No matter what I say

    Maybe someday somehow
    Is the featured phrase
    A slogan for the guilt I bare
    That will not go away
    Feed the thoughts within my head
    With every glancing smile
    Maybe someday somehow
    We can stop living in denial

    Caught up in delusion
    Trapped within the dream
    Every single word you say
    Played out in every scene
    I dream away my life
    Because I can’t escape
    The fact that you’re not here with me
    No matter what I say

    Anything to forget
    The life we never lived
    Anything to forget
    What we never had
    Anything to forget
    The words we never said
    Anything to forget
    This feeling that I have

    Just to be there for you
    Is to live in a lie

    This is the dream scene
    It’s there for all to see
    But somehow you still can’t…
     
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    Theazninvasion68

    Theazninvasion68 It's like blood to a vampire, our tragic desire. LPA Super VIP

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    :D Ah Great! Sounds more like a song to me.

    I like the presentation on how you use it in such a theater way, showing us the dream to distract us away.

    :) well done.
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks. :)
     
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    Linja

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    It flows well and is lyrical in a rough, broken-hearted sort of way. I like it.
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks. :)
     

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