I'm just showing it around to see what people think of it. So.. tell me what you think. Bad or good. I would like to improve on my writing. Sitting in such darkness to which no light may enter Watching such words pass me by as tears fall from my eyes I see her as I close my eyes and fade away from the eyes of others I no longer am here For how can something exist when no one sees such a thing I speak and my words just fall into a empty well to which not even echos are heard I try to exist but fail as everyone speaks and no words fall onto me So here I am In a world of my own Seeing her still as I close my eyes I speak softly in riddles, wishing such words would be heard But as I speak he runs to my words and erases them just as they come close I now seek the sky for answers as I watch such wonders pass me by Now my eyes bleed with such pain as I fall deep into sorrow Why must I keep failing? Why must my words be erasen? Why must I ask so many questions and no answers be told? And still I sit in such darkness to which no light may enter