Ghost

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    Anthony.

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    Intro

    I wonder when you'll tell me
    If you're faking or it's reality
    Your deception lasted for long
    But now the game is over

    Chorus

    Stop hiding yourself behind lies
    Tell me the thruth or go away!
    I don't care about what you say
    Tell me the thruth or go away!
    You've been faking all the way

    Verse 1

    Help me find reality
    Or go away from me!
    I've been living a lie for much too long
    But sooner or later you've got to fall
    I've dropped from high but fell on my feet
    And now you're gonna pay for it!

    *Chorus

    Verse 2 (x2)

    Stop haunting me!
    Go away from me!
    I don't care about you!
    You've become a ghost to me!

    *Chorus

    Outro

    I wanna wake up from this nightmare
    You're not part of my life anymore
    I've erased you from my mind
    You're gone, I don't wanna see you no more

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    This is my first draft, and I know it's far from being excellent. That's why I'm posting this here, so you can give me clues on improving it and getting better in writing.
     
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    Andrea

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    I like it. Great work. :)
     

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