What happens if the karma don't work and you're all alone? Do you run and hide or pretend that it's all same? Do you come to me and cry your heart out or do you let the blood flow? What happens if the karma don't work and you're all alone? Please don't fall head over heels and then come back here Please don't think karma will save you from yourselves Please don't think that you will rise to heaven Please don't think you have an innocent soul Rising up there goes the karma, it floats away like air Now you're back up on your feet with your will to survive Karma will save you, Karma won't save you Karma won't save, Karma will save you What happened to our will to survive without karma? Do we even know how hard it is to get the karma back again? We'll stop rising off our feet, and relying for it to save us, what then? Do we run and duck for cover when karma hits is in the ass? Please don't fall heels over your head and then have the guts Please don't think karma isn't strong to save you from impact Please don't think you will sink down to the depths of hell Please don't think you're the only one We fight for our purpose and we fight to stay alive We fight for what is wrong and we praise on another We are nothing but liars and thieves deep down We are cheaters to ourselves and we're playing the fool
The repetition feels odd to me. There's no pattern behind it and it discomforts me. Also it feels to me like you use the word karma a BIT too much. It kind of takes the power out of the word.
There's a few stanzas I like but mostly I don't like it much. I do agree that I do think you've overused the word Karma. A few suggestions (though they will seem bland) Maybe this should be something like Rising, a spiraling wheel of fortune floats above like wind Now you're back up on your feet but still have to survive in the end Fate will save you and let you fall Because it hates you yet it's love doesn't stall" or something like that, just throwing around suggestions.