My Insanity

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    Luke

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    Sitting in a dark room
    Staring at the wall
    Nothing surrounds me
    No windows to the outside
    No doors to leave freely

    I feel like I'm inside a prison
    I feel like I'm gonna cry
    Remembering my sanity
    As I wait to die

    The madness inside
    The nights I have cried
    Because no one's there for me
    And with the fire inside
    Not burning so bright
    This is my insanity

    My mind plays tricks on me
    My eyes project evil
    No one's answering my screams
    This is worse than hell
    Demons plague my dreams

    I feel like I'm gonna break
    Tears drip from my eyes
    Sanity becomes history
    As I lay down to die

    The madness inside
    The nights I have cried
    Because no one's there for me
    And with the fire inside
    Not burning so bright
    This is my insanity

    You've all labled me
    As crazy
    Why do you single me out?
    This world full of torture and darkness
    Is what makes me scream and shout

    No one's ever one hundred percent
    After you've witnessed what I've seen
    Poison pushes through your veins
    As hell invades your dreams

    The madness inside
    The nights I have cried
    Because no one's there for me
    And with the fire inside
    Not burning so bright
    This is my insanity

    The madness inside
    Please help me
    And this fire inside
    Will burn through the night
    Because this insanity's not part of me
     
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    Arhaz

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    i like the choice of words....the flow's ok. cool job... ^_^
     
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    Linja

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    I like this, some lines remind me of one of my old poems, but never mind that, this is good.
    Cheers
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^

    And rest assured,I do not take ideas for lyrics from anyone on this site without permission.
     
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    Dedicated

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    Sweet lyrics. Are these gonna be used for your band?

    This part is awesome :):

    I feel like I'm inside a prison
    I feel like I'm gonna cry
    Remembering my sanity
    As I wait to die
     
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    Luke

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    I havn't given them these lyrics yet...I was going to but then 5 guys beat me up :lol:

    Thanks for the comments everyone :)
     
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    heshboy

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    This is great lyrics, I loved it, and keep them coming.
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^

    I've kept them coming for a while now :lol:
     
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    Wow!!!! That was amazing! 10/10! :chemist:
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^
     

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