I've been writing this work for some weeks now, going over it when ever I've found the time. So lets see what everyone thinks. You can’t understand my pain Raining Scarlet protests Taking all the hope away Breaking so fast, I can’t grasp on steadily I’m slipping again in the rain But can’t be proud of the change on the outside of me The sensation rushes back so fast, I can’t grasp My last chance before it all slips past Cutting away to make it rain Opening my wounds Continue the issues Dripping harder it taints Creating a lake of hate I start dreaming I’m bleeding again I try to escape But it’s too late And I begin to procrastinate Grabbing hold to restart my art It all pulls apart I’m forced to restart Where is my sense? I’m tearing away Scars are carved all over The pain sinks in And then I slip away again Cutting away to make it rain Opening my wounds Continue the issues Dripping harder it taints Creating a lake of hate Grasping on to choose I reach out and skip a beat/ and call out what to do This must be a catastrophe Because the last of me has missed the chance to be free Though you can’t here me calling out what to do I’m saved, un caged for the change Healed by the choice of you Warnings in the thoughts adjourned Take a journey in the scars left to be cured Warnings in the thoughts adjourned Take a journey in the scars left to be cured Warnings in the thoughts adjourned Take a journey in the scars left to be cured Cutting away to make it rain Opening my wounds Continue the issues Dripping harder it taints Creating a lake of hate
great work...but not your best (people like me shouldn't expect the best from everyone everytime, i guess...DANG!). yet i enjoyed reading it.