This could've been better if I actually had some more time to work on it.. Thoughts will be appreciated. Reborn On the day that we die All will laugh and some will cry But none will know that you and I Will live again In the morgue bodies lie Pale and cold in silent night Silver coins in our eyes To pay again A trip into another life We sing the song of butterflies Flying across the clear blue sky Reborn again So spread your wings and I'll spread mine On sweetest flower we will dine Before we know it will be time To die again
Wow...that's just...wow. It's absolutely beautiful. One of my favorites here on LPA. Very well done. In the morgue bodies lie Pale and cold in silent night Silver coins in our eyes To pay again This gave the whole poem a real strong meaning to me. Does this piece have anything to do with karma?
Thanks man, it really means a lot It's kinda about reincarnation and being born over and over again as a different being.