Wrote this a while ago...tweaked around with it and yea, enjoy. And so here I am stained with these unforgotten memories I never had hope before All I had was me myself and I And in the darkest corners of my pain and sorrow I found no hope Each step I took never seemed to amaze anyone But now look at what I’ve become I’m so much more than what I was before Better than whom I was before [x2] Just kept it locked up inside Never realized how much it hurt Underneath my stained cold heart All that’s in my head these days Are the memories that will never fade away Just like a bad dream Too sad to explain So I’ll part from this pain Taken within, my wounds they spread open wide These terrible thoughts, of my stolen pride Fallen again, and I can’t get up Take me away, from these cold, bitter thoughts Show me the way, lead me out, away from this pain [x2] Please don’t let them stay [repeat] Take me away… By screaming as loud as I can Forget them Screaming for my wounds to cure Bleeding Shouting for these memories to move on away [X chorus] btw: i dont really like this one lol....kinda choppy....ehh iunno just wondering wut your opinions are....
nice song. i noticed it was a song when there was a x2 in it. it is okay, but the thing i like about it, it brings a visual image to the audience, which is one of the most important things you have to when writing a good poem.