I never post in this forum but I thought I would give it a shot. Let me know what you think. Tormented You laughed and pointed, in my face Your words put me in, a state of disgrace Tormented and anguished, is how I feel You don't care, you just make my soul peel "You are nothing", they tell me Believing them, labels me guility I don't know, where to turn Because their words, make my insides burn I can't think straight, anymore My mind is cluttered, right to the core I'm broken down, and out of place I want this pain, to be erased I wish they would all, disappear Everything then, would be crystal clear I could go back, to living my life Instead of being verbally stabbed, like a knife
Nah, it's not my first. I have written over 50+ songs. They're not really that great but I think they're alright.
Nah, it's not my first. I have written over 50+ songs. They're not really that great but I think they're alright. [/b][/quote] You did a good job anyways.