I know the rhymes are really simple, but I'd like to have your opinions to make it better . Fear is winning over me As I approach the enemy Terror is outpassed by anger As we get closer But I have to face my inner foe Before comes the time to go My toughts guided by the sound of the boots Of the problem, I must come to the roots Kill or be killed, here's the choice Should I listen to my inner voice? Give up, or get up and fight? At this moment, the planes are in flight Ready to deliver their deadly paylodad Soon we'll have to take the road Gun in hand, ready to die Dead bodies, on the ground they lie These are the signs we're getting nearer Why am I doing this, I'm not a killer Everything's confused in my head I wish I could wake up in my bed War is really horrible Leaving behind corpses and rubble This is now time to attack Before they get us by the back I must leave all those toughts behind Before I loose my mind