winter

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    AHV

    AHV New Member

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    Winter

    Sun is turning to moon.
    Now with two moons
    ruleing the sky,
    daylight must walk
    shorter distants while
    ice queen is starting to breath.

    Ewerything alive
    will be killed and clouds
    are covered with blood,
    then you cover yourself
    with animals for protection.

    Birds are escapeing
    from all this beautiful
    madness and dead
    water everywhere waiting
    for vitalization.

    And after silence of minds,
    snowdrops are breaking
    throught the corpses with
    prophecy that tell us that
    hope is starting to shine
    throught the haze of cold hell.
     
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    Boo

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    Oh that's really good
    i like it how it doesn't rhyme. Poems that don't rhyme seem to just be freer and they can go with exactly what you're trying to say without trying to rhyme every line.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    very picturesque, good job! ;)
     

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