move on happy

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    Anya

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    a short poem I wrote in ten minutes that I may one day make as a song..please comment I really would like more than just 2 posts this time lol.

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    every day I hear your screaming,
    choking my life do death,
    as if I am nothing,

    you don't even care about my yelling,
    you mentally block it out,
    and ignore me,
    constantly....

    shutting away all the confusion in my mind,
    away from the hatred,
    away from the anger,
    focusing on the blade in my hand,
    cutting it deeper,
    cutting it farther,
    everything won't just go away,
    it get's closer and closer,
    why do I deserve this pain?
    I want love to be nearer...

    i've come to realize,
    that you will never listen,
    it's a waste of time for me,
    to replace of what is missing,
    life is fragile so I might as well,
    whipe the blood on the walls,
    whipe the blood on the walls,
    so I can forget and move on happy..

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    It's basically about moving on and trying to forget all the sh** that happened in your life. I hope you all can relate well...
     
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    Tony

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    That's Really Good ^_^
     
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    Anya

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    Awsome thank you. I praise you! lol at least I got a comment i'm content now thankyou ^_^
     
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    Chris.

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    I really like it, so deep and emotional, expressed really well, i can relate! anyway awesome job
     
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    Thanks I appreciate you guys for replying.
    Anymore comments? :)
     

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