Dream big is what I read in the newspaper I feel like a window on the outside of a skyscraper I'm just a dreamer, peering off into the skylines Wondering if existence is even worth my time Can I just pass by through the empty space and time? And set free from this tragedy, and chase what's mine? No / Go figure, i'm following life's pre-destined scripture I'm just a small pixel within the bigger picture
Not bad. I'd recommend digging even deeper, and making sure you've utilized the best metaphors you can think of. The last metaphor is the standout line of the verse.
Not bad it could pay off if the artist is ready to put out. I like the lyrics, are you gonna record it? If yes get that red bull and go crazy.