Deep emotional scars

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    Debus

    Debus Morbid Fascination LPA Addict

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    This poem is all about the past two weeks of my life which have been very bad. I had to relieve my anger somehow so here goes. Any comments are welcome


    I can’t stand the sight of your face
    You make me sick with all of this
    You’re supposed to by my friend
    But treat me like the hated
    You have done this to me before
    But I really can’t stand it again

    I feel our deep friendship
    Deteriorating with time
    And it never stops
    I hold scars deep inside from your torture
    And they will never heal
    As long as you are still here

    You’re just like everyone else
    Picking at my scars effortlessly
    Until there is no more left of me to hurt
    I can no longer cry for you or myself
    My wounds are so deep
    It pains me to even think of you

    Tell me what I did to deserve this
    And why it hurts so much
    I want the answers now
    Not when you are finished with me
    I won’t cry a single tear for you anymore
    You’re not worth my anger, pain and frustration
     
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    good stuff right there people. i really like it. nice work, man.
     
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    Glenn

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    Great Work! Woah, seems like a lot has been going on with you. Hope things get better. :)
     
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    Debus

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    Hey guys thanks for the feedback ^_^. And thanks DuffsterLP :)
     

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