My Knife

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    Anya

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    Woo! Nice one--I think. I'm not too sure about it. It's actually about other things besides 'my knife' which is why I like it in a way. It can mean almost anything--depending on the reader. =)

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    -My Knife-

    this constant itching
    it's scratching me inside
    one step further-
    all I need to survive
    this pain can last no longer
    once more- I swear
    ruin me
    destroy me
    trust me- I don't care
    there's nothing to fear
    this peacful- lonely darkness
    leave me- hold me
    rid my ache- my saddness
     
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    Glenn

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    That's good :) It's kind of confusing, but after I read it a few times, I got it.
     
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    Yeah I need to fix it up a bit I admit.. :lol:
     
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    Methybrea

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    I know what Duffster means, very abstract i guess

    Very good imagery though I love it! :)
     
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    I think i'm just having a writers block moment. Dunno.. But thanks! :)
     
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    Anya strikes again! 10/10
     
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    yeah it took me a while to figure it out, but im a sloooow person. otherwise, its great ^_^
     
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    No. you're not having a writers block. I was having a readers block.
     
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    :hugz:



    Duffster - Never heard of that one. :lol:
     

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