A turned on street light But its to bright to be midnight Its nine PM But it seems like noon Its nine PM Its to bright The night came too soon Playing football in the park Skating up a half pipe Listening to all the dogs bark SUMMER I can remember the heat SUMMER Smiles so sweet SUMMER MY SONG OF SUMMER But its time to leave Venture into the autum breeze Summer ended And we'll all fade away Summer ended We will all hibernate ----- Only took 2 seconds but enjoy
It's good....but I think you need to work on it some more. You need to make the verses flow more. U get what I mean?
I know what you meen Its a bit crap because me and a mate just threw down a few lines and I just posted 'em without any editing so It needs A LOT of work Remember though this is a short poem not a song