I was board last night and decided to sit down a write out stuff I was thinking. Half the stuff in here doesn't make sense with everything else, and some stuff doesn't fit in with thes rest. It's just a bunch of random thoughts and probably lines that in the future I'll end up using for songs. Anyways, let me know what you think....I know it sucks so I'll expect a lot of bad replies. :chemist: You making everything inside cease Causing everything to disappear Holding wounds that go deep inside That infected the way I’ve become It’s you who’s given me hope If I could refresh my life I would And make this state of disbelief Turn into something unbelievable I’ve felt this doubt before It seems like nothing is possible I’m taught now with an understanding That the life I seek Is only a blink away And when everything falls the hardest It’s then I find a new meaning Of a word called reality That in the final days of my life That I’ll die in peace leaving everyone Living their life with a part of me inside Never to question the authority of my actions Knowing that my sixth sense has played a role To move about and enter deep in the soul Passing through the darkness inside Sweeping away the evil that dwells within Restoring hope and everything good that was lost Keeping serenity held where it’s supposed to be Always have new faith to wash away the blood And every drop of tear that brushes aside Clearing out the fog that blinds the vision That corrupts the passion of humanity Now I see that everything serves a purpose That someday leads to the point of life The light inside that seems to find a way out Giving everyone outside a new way To reach the force that was impossible to seek Moving the scars that show unhealed wounds So there’s everything to see and nothing to feel Leaving only memories left that are always thought of To eventually float away with the air that’s taken in That’s been giving the new life of unknown existence There’s a place inside where peace is found Where the pain is dissolved And when thoughts that are kept way back Force their way that they can’t be forgotten And when grief and despair are shot away Turning in a firework of amazement
i do this stuff as well but mine are really s*it. the thing i like about this kind of stuff are the random emotions you feel. but i never edit mine afterwards. this just sounded very confusing.