Papercut (Ridiculous)

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    Adam

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    Papercut (Ridiculous)
    (Note: I edited this song 3 times over to try and make it better and I personally still havent got it perfect so it needs a little more work but enjoy it ^_^ )



    All the screaming and crying, and I’m so sick of it
    Its so ridiculous
    My life’s so bland, and I’m so sick of it
    Its so ridiculous
    Having to wake up and started run
    Livin’ life in the fast lane just for fun
    Its so ridiculous
    I CAN’T LIVE LIKE THIS

    You’re a perfect picture
    Just look into my eyes
    You’re a perfect picture
    Just feel like an angel without surprise

    You tell me to get over it
    Its so ridiculous
    You say my life is full of ####
    I’m so sick of it
    Well at least people know my name
    And I won’t lie down and die from shame
    Its so ridiculous
    Because I can runaway
    With a place to hide
    I can comeback
    I’m so sick of it

    You’re a perfect picture
    Just look into my eyes
    You’re a perfect picture
    Just feel like an angel without surprise

    All the screaming and crying
    My life’s so bland
    Having to wake up and started run
    Livin’ life in the fast lane just for fun
    Its so ridiculous
    AND I’M SO SICK OF IT

    So now you know me
    Now you know my fear
    Will you be there
    If you wanna go
    RUNAWAY NOW
    If your gonna stay
    SIT RIGHT DOWN

    You’re a perfect picture
    Just look into my eyes
    You’re a perfect picture
    Just feel like an angel without sprise

    JUST MOVE ON
    No one cares for lies
    Or how you got the best of
    No one cares for you
    Or how you can’t walk on your own two feet
    ANYMORE

    I gotta…
    Just look…
    I gotta…
    Just feel…

    I GOTTA
    JUST LOOK INTO YOUR EYES
    I GOTTA
    JUST FEEL YOUR EMOTION

    I’ll never ask of you again
    I never knew you would get hurt
    I’ll never ask again
    I didn’t think it could get worse

    You’re a perfect picture
    Just look into my eyes
    You’re a perfect picture
    Just feel like an angel without surprise

    You’re a perfect picture
    JUST LOOK INTO YOUR EYES
    Just look into my eyes
    JUST FEEL YOUR EMOTION
    You’re a perfect picture
    I gotta just feel

    I repeat myself
    Not knowing what to do
    I just fall into myself
    Not knowing what I fell through
    Just take me home
    Show me I can do more with myself

    You’re a perfect picture
    Just look into my eyes
    You’re a perfect picture
    Just feel like an angel without surprise

    Even though you’re perfect in gallery
    Doesn’t mean you can take smack at me
    We were friends until it fell apart
    Before you even knew a thing
    You had a change of heart
    SO AS YOU THREW YOUR PAST BEHIND
    YOU THROUGH ME OUT ASWELL

    No hope left
    Just look at the…
    Perfect picture before my eyes
    Everyone will see it with surprise
    Except me
    Because I know what your all about
    Because I’m the one that cares

    Please tell me what you think
     
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    Glenn

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    That's really good! Descriptive lyrics...but they're kind of confusing. I see the message but some of the lyrics don't relate to the message. Keep workin though. :)
     
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    Adam

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    Thanx for the feadback
    I'll try and use what you said when I re-edit my songs later this week ^_^
     

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