Eyes of the...

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    Adam

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    Eyes of the…

    I’ll follow you until you let your guard down
    You make me sick but you’re addictive
    I’ll hide behind you until you stop breathing and your veins stop pumping
    You fascinate me, I just wanna get close to you

    This is never what I needed
    I just felt like I had to have it
    I just felt like it had to be mine
    I’ll be the shadow on your back until I make you mine

    I’m always there I have seen your every move
    I memorize every step you take and I retrace them
    I enjoy hunting you down then making you aware
    …I wonder if my fantasies scare you

    This is never what I needed
    I just felt like I had to have it
    I just felt like it had to be mine
    I’ll be the shadow on your back until I make you mine

    You make me wanna close my eyes and dream of…
    I can’t take you anymore…
    I can’t take this anymore…
    I can’t take this, what is this?
    I can’t…I can’t…I can’t…I can’t
    I can’t take this what is this?
    I can’t take this anymore…

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    NOTES: I was just messing about with a love hate obsession type lyric thats supossed to be half screamed half whispered in certain places I never meant to turn into a proper song but it seems like I did and even though I wrote this song personally it scares me. lol.
     
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    Luke

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    Its actualy pretty good,I like it


    But can I just say to eveyone,If I can be bothered to comment on peoples poems and lyrics and stuff then perhaps you could do the same for me,I'm actualy in a band an I need as many comments about my lyrics as possible.

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    Adam

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    Thanx for the feedback. ^_^





    I've seen and comment on a few of your songs in the past and I think they're pretty good. But I shall go and look at somemore. ;)
     

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