(*Piano Starts) Yo This Is My Story Of How You Can Try So Hard And End Up With Nothin' At All Listen Closly It starts with My life,My time alone While you sat up high in your kingdom throne Looking at me from up way up high Lights in the sky That you denied (Can't you feel) The tension between us all When I remember the day That I took the fall I felt so small While you stood up tall I watched as the time took its tole (It can't be real) But you didn't look out below Your throne was thrown out the window But in the end it was me so low Cos I didn't let my emotions flow (So I watched you go) I kept everything inside And even though I tried It all fell apart What Today I see Will all eventualy be The memory of that time When... I Tried so hard And got so far But in the end it doesn't even matter You had to go And spoil it all And In the end my pride was left shattered One thing I don't know how It doesn't really matter when you look at it now Keep that in mind When it is the time For you to shine Hold it close In spite of the way you were mocking me Acting like I was part of your property I still remeber all the fights you had with me It all (seems unreal) Things aren't like they were back then You let out your pain and became a freind But then you turned back again And left me to fend for myself again (It wasn't right) I kept everything inside And even though I tried It all fell apart What Today I see Will all eventualy be The memory of that time When... I Tried so hard And got so far But in the end it doesn't even matter You had to go And spoil it all And In the end my pride was left shattered I put my trust In you Pushed as far as I can go For all this theres only one thing you should know I put my trust In you Pushed as far as I can go For all this theres only one thing YOU WILL KNOW! I Tried so hard And got so far But in the end it doesn't even matter You had to go And spoil it all And In the end my pride was left shattered This is no.7 of my linkin park covers.Others are: Points Of Authority Forgotten Breaking The Habit Plce.4 mie head High Voltage One Step Closer Please tell me what you think!
You can, its just nothing special. It doesnt take much work to just replace a few words of a song. Eventually the novelty wears off and it just becomes boring.
I think you should take the lack of comments from everyone as a hint that this is tired and that your spats of rebellion of "i'll do it anyways" only make you look childish.
It's great, but maybe try writing your own material. You know, that is yours, but have your own ideas and not base it off something.