The Way Of The World (Flashbacks of bad memories)

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    Luke

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    I wake up at 7 and get ready for school
    But its just another day of playing the fool
    Another few hours of being kicked around
    Another new person to help me off the ground
    And when the bell rings at a quarter past three
    I have to take the long way home for my own safety
    And when I arrive home I watch some TV
    The news says hundreds of thousands die in a tsunami
    I think to myself how could god let all these people die
    And why do I live such a fucked up life
    So now I'm holding a knife against my wrist
    The waves of pain make my clench my fist
    I see the note I wrote lying on the chair
    Explaining how life was just too unfair
    And that I promise to watch over you every night and day
    And listen in on everything you say
    I just need to go and I love you all
    P.S I slit my wrists cos a building's too bigger fall
    This is the last time I will breathe in the air
    The memories of life rekindle all that's unfair
    I'm so sorry that it had to end like this
    I've tried hanging and jumping but I'd rather just slit these wrists

    This world has taken its toll on me
    A fading blur is all I see
    The Pain is rushing throughout me
    Flashbacks of bad memories

    Suddenly I wake up and I'm on a hospital bed
    The doctor's explaining how much blood I bled
    My mum is crying and keeps on asking why
    My little sis has a tear in her eye
    I don't say anything and just lye there
    My little sis screams how she was so scared
    I would hug her if I could but I can't move my arms
    I tell her I didn't mean her any harm
    I just love you and mum way too damn much
    For the world to take you away like everthing else
    But I guess my plan backfired on me
    Maybe now I'll look at the world differently
    I guess I'll just have to except this world of sadness and pain
    I'll just have to except how this world is so strange
    But I doubt anything is gonna change for my life
    And saying I'm happy would just be telling a lie
    So I've created plan B this plan can't go wrong
    And sis this time I need you to be strong
    When I'm gone I need you to look after mum
    No come here and give me that hug

    This world has taken its toll on me
    A fading blur is all I see
    The Pain is rushing throughout me
    Flashbacks of bad memories

    All I see is darknes
    An ever longing darkness
    No light here
    Nothing but an emptiness
    I look down now
    on the world
    But forever walking
    Through the cold
    The darkness
    The coldness is all that I know now
    And I see what the purpose of life is
    Too bad I'm already dead



    **this is not based on anyone in particular but its inspired (I know its not really the right word) by teenage suicide**
     
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    Wow. That's some powerful stuff! It's pretty amazing :eek:
     
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    Luke

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    Thank you,anymore comments people?
     
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    That's some nice stuff you go there.
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^ anymore comments?
     
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    That's great. Good job.
     
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    Luke

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    Thank you ^_^

    Any more comments to help me out a little?
     
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    Great Job! Well Done!
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^

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