faint (rmx.)

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    minuteforce

    minuteforce Danny's not here, Mrs. Torrance. LPA Team

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    i had serious doubts about letting this one out, as i wrote it ages ago, but, here it goes. i don't wish to be flamed about not writing my own material, btw. (sorry if it's a bit repetitive, but i actually pictured it in my mind as a song)

    (You are)
    The one I've always despised
    The one holding all the cards
    Can't make you change your mind, I can't change the fact
    That you've left me with these scars
    (You are)
    The one I've always avoided
    The one I've learned to hate
    But I can't stop this feeling inside
    I can't help but feel it's too late
    (So I)
    Let go, watching you
    Turn your back like you always do
    Face away and pretend that I'm not
    But I'll be here 'cause you're all that I've got

    Lies won't fade the way they did before
    Don't turn your back on me, I won't be ignored
    Time won't take away the pain you caused
    Don't turn away from me, I won't be ignored

    (I am)
    The one you've always ignored
    The one you've kept shut out
    You act like I don't exist, but I've always been here
    And I've never had a single doubt
    (I am)
    A victim of the endless lies
    And a lack of confidence
    The one person that you've always considered
    Just a matter of irrelevance
    (So I)
    Let go, watching you
    Turn your back like you always do
    Face away and pretend that I'm not
    But I'll be here 'cause you're all that I've got

    Every day, you seem so different
    It feels like you're always so far away
    Every day, you seem so distant
    Every day, you feel so (faint)

    Lies won't fade the way they did before
    Don't turn your back on me, I won't be ignored
    Time won't take away the pain you caused
    Don't turn away from me, I won't be ignored

    I can't feel the way I did before
    (Don't turn your back on me) I won't be ignored

    No, hear me out now
    You're gonna listen to me, like it or not
    Right now, hear me out now
    You're gonna listen to me, like it or not
    Right now, hear me out now
    You're gonna listen to me, like it or not
    Right now, hear me out now
    You're gonna listen to me, like it or not
    (Right now)

    Every day, you seem so different
    It feels like you're always so far away
    Every day, you seem so distant
    Every day, you feel so (faint)

    (I can't feel)
    (I can't feel)
    (I can't feel)
    I won't be ignored

    Lies won't fade the way they did before
    Don't turn your back on me, I won't be ignored
    Time won't take away the pain you caused
    Don't turn away from me, I won't be ignored

    Lies won't fade the way they did before
    Don't turn your back on me, I won't be ignored
    Time won't take away the pain you caused
    Don't turn away from me, I won't be ignored

    I won't be (ignored)

    (Don't turn your back on me) I won't be (ignored)
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Nice. Mabye not many people apriciate remixes around here im not sure, no one has posted one in a while but i think they are great. it is some of you own material and it is bloody hard to write to a tune that is set for you and not follow what you want. i say great job, remix flowed well to the tune of the song. good work. keep writing.
     
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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    i thought this was really good. i could sing alone to what i though it would sound like. good job

    p.s. i don't mind remixes as long as you recognise that it is just that!
     
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    Luke

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    Not bad but it wouldn't be classified as a remix,it would be classified as a parody ;)
     
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    minuteforce

    minuteforce Danny's not here, Mrs. Torrance. LPA Team

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    :) well, i see parody as being a song written to a tune that is about something totally different.
     

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