i know this is short but i guess i needed to let out some frustration! fucking nothing if i was to leave this world tomorow what the hell have i got to show for being here fucking nothing fucking nothing i haven't left a mark not a finger print not even a small dent in anyones life what have i got to show fucking nothing fucking nothing if i was to go tomorow i only have a few things but nothing that's touched anyone's lifes i wouldn't leave a gaping whole in the world i would have nothing to show fucking nothing fucking nothing i have nothing to contribute nothing worthwhile i've left fucking nothing fucking nothing
other than i felt fucking nothing was repeated a few to many times i liked it. Overall it was pretty good, not your best but i do understad it was mainly to vent some anger.
Wow. If your constructive vents are like this, I'd love to see a really put-together poem. -stares in amazement-
he he! thanks torn rose! it's either i get stuff down on paper or someone, undeserving i might add, will get it!