Case Study in Repression

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Case Study in Repression

    Soul destroying polluted waste,
    My shell is fleeing,
    I hurt myself to feel safe,
    Then wish away this bleeding,
    As the repression gets to me,
    Pinprick at the fault lines,
    Empty the broken shards of glass,
    Peel back the skin and pick me apart,

    And it’s not always me,
    The only one who feels this,
    My dirt is on the inside,
    The reflection’s in my head,
    A case study in repression,
    These feelings won’t go away,

    Hate-breeding self-indulgence,
    The walls are closing in,
    My mind is numb from filth,
    I pray to escape my sin,
    I’ll erase till I get closure,
    Reptilian underneath the lies,
    Spread the words of disease,
    Are you afraid to see,

    And it’s not always me,
    The only one who feels this,
    My dirt is on the inside,
    The reflection’s in my head,
    A case study in repression,
    These feelings won’t go away.


    thoughts please...
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Nice work, i really like this one, for me, it is one of your best. It was just amazing. I just loved the message as i can identify myself with it. It is just great. Keep it up.
     
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    Christopher

    Christopher Über Member Über Member

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    I think it's really great,
    i wanted to write something and it looked like that what you wrote,
    only my english vocabulary isn't as complex as yours cause i live in Belgium ^_^ and we don't speak english here
    but learn form what we see on TV
     
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    fallenangel

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    this one was really really good! very good descriptives in this one.

    i love the whole thing! well done! ;)
     

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