Come my Way. Drowning in the scent of a misfit vision, Holding on to death’s calm sensation, Blooming into tomorrow, like yesterday, Waiting every moment, for you to come my away. Alone on a bench, alone in real, Teaching myself to learn, dying to feel, Alone with the shallow blue waters I stay, Waiting, alone, please come my way. Crying and sobbing for a silken embrace, Wailing and shouting, failing this race. Touched by temptation to lose every time, Falling and breaking, all becoming a crime. Calculated and measured, sized up for you, Forcing to lie to myself for you. Building these castles of gruesome days, Gullible joy, seeing you on your way. Trying so hard to know that I hate, Remembering so hard, you ruined my fate, Clutching on to the fading moments, today, Don’t go, I beg, please come my way. Faring so terribly in faking this disgust, Hate in shadows, I’m prevented to rust, Longing for your touch, you’re forgiven, Retreating in your arms, I’m sent to heaven. comments please!
fantastic work there freakolp! this flowed immensly well and was just so well written. how do you do it? i love your writings and you obviously have great talent. write more please!
I must say i really, really, really enjoyed this poem, really beautiful. I think it's one of your best, Once again, a great job.