Darkness takes the Soul

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    heshboy

    heshboy Well-Known Member

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    B) Yeah this is crazy, I like the second rap part better though.

    Do you want a revolution?
    I am taking pages from the US constitution, bringing stylistic rhythm while Cooking in my kitchen
    Rhythms that got everyone tripping (oh)
    Everyone around me is on some crazy shit
    Its getting dark, and now I am hearing noises that sound like barks
    Where is this noise coming from? I see no one
    I am taking shots around the clock while gaping at my watch
    It’s not about what you thought, it’s all about what I brought
    Wondering what time I had arrived?
    When did I come by?
    Something calling from my insides
    This confusion is too much fusion
    It’s now time to say good by


    Cries that fuel our souls
    Times to ease are souls
    Cries that show arrival
    Verses spilling out the Bible


    It isn’t time (yo)
    For the grinning children’s black hearts to shine
    Strange smiles wrapping through my mind
    Showing tastes too dark
    It’s getting my senses too bent out they won’t work
    Shinning souls getting darker
    Harder to see, you’re not pleased
    My souls sights going away
    Trying to keep me farther away
    I am trying to stay back in the light, but I have to give flight
    I just can’t fight

    Cries that fuel our souls
    Times to ease are souls
    Cries that show arrival
    Verses spilling out the Bible
     
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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    quite good. i don't really like raps but this one was pretty good. i felt the flow got lost a couple of times, but otherwise well done .
     
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    heshboy

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    Thanks Silent
    B)
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    hey thats so awesome..
    u come up with craziest but the best stuff !
    btw im a chick from the other thread..lol
     
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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    Same comment as your "Rewind" poem.
     
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    heshboy

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    lol, thanks.
     

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