Now i see the light is fading, Anything but these feelings. They tear me up inside, Like a hungry animal. Wanting more and more, Until it kills itself trying. Now I know, I am to be, Something hidden from my eyes. The light is fading before me, My eyes are burning with no feeling. Coldness strikes me with a force, So great I cannot tell. If its true or not, now I see, The black velvet curtain draped around me. If this is me, what am I, Jumping into the darkness. Save me before you catch me, I stand here in my darkness.
"Save me before you catch me, I stand here in my darkness. " I really like that part. Just work on your stuff more and you will be great. I really liked this.