Golden heart

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    Glenn

    Glenn Super Member LPA Super Member

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    A pirate's eyes gleam with the sight of buried treasure
    Also within the engineer, this gleam, he must think with brilliant measure.
    His gold comes not from leisure, pay, or overtime
    It comes from the completion of restoration at the midnight bell chime.
    The sea rover thinks of no other as he slits the innocent's throat
    While the mastermind must conquer problems sitting in a boat.
    A boat that floats over a seemingly hopeless city
    No decent person can avoid without showing pity.
    Even the pirate must stop to express his regret
    To the city which he hadn't plundered yet
    However, this tragedy, we will never forget.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Not the greatest flow ever as i felt some lines were too long the rhyming didn't feel that forced which is a good thing. Overall it was pretty good, but not your best.
     
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    Glenn

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    I'm surprised you remember my best...I have written here in a long time.
     

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