The Lonely Side Of Me I won’t hit the bottom As long as there is More to fall I won’t see the outside As long as I can’t Break these walls Cause behind all this There’s a world that I don’t know So much I have missed But I don’t want to miss any more There’s a place in me That you didn’t see That you didn’t see at all Because you’ve never seen The lonely side of me The lonely side of me I won’t have a future As long as I am Chained to past I won’t know the answers As long as I don’t Ask myself Cause behind all this There’s a world that I don’t know So much I have missed But I don’t want to miss any more There’s a place in me That you didn’t see That you didn’t see at all Because you’ve never seen The lonely side of me The lonely side of me There’s a place in me That you didn’t see That you didn’t see at all You didn’t want to see The lonely side of me The lonely side of me
I found this one too repetative, and some lines seemed to short and subtle for a poem that should seem a little....gentler in my mind, good job, but not your best.