The One That Needs

The One That Needs

The one that hurts is the one that loves
And the one that lies is the one with truth
So the one that cries is the one that laughs
And the one that needs is not the one that gets

The one that lives is the one that dies
And the one that sleeps is the one awake
So the one that wins is the one that’s lost
And the one that needs is not the one that takes

The one that is, is the one that’s not
And the one that bleeds is the one ok
So the one that stands is the one that goes
And the one that needs is not the one that gains

The one that sees is the one that’s blind
And the one who dies in the end survives
Cause the one who cares is the one who don’t
And the one that needs always pays the price

 

I liked it in a strange way, it had a good if not many true messages in it, the only thing that i felt was missing is a conclusion, it felt as if it stopped mid poem, just ended. Other than that i really like this.

 

Yeah that's exactly what I think of it. Unfinished. But I guess some things are just meant to stay that way. Maybe you can help me with a conclusion?