Empty Promises This is me Standing in the spotlight of your play It’s a masterpiece I must admit You fooled me all the way This is me Dancing in the ashes of my past Cause the more I had the more you took I’ve got nothing at last Empty promises is all I find When I confide in you And no matter how hard I can try I end up being fool Empty promises is all I get When I look into you Cause the truth is made of only lies I learned something from you This is me I burned just all the bridges for escape Now that you were here I didn’t think I’d need them anyway This is me I’ve always been the loser in this game Now I realized you paralyzed me A dirty game to play
I think this is the best of the few so far, i really liked the message and it was written as if you had experienced it, it flowed well and the rhyming didn't feel forced. Nice work.