Very fun to do. Music makes me feel alive I sing this song just to see you smile It makes happier every time I try Music travels everywhere Just look around the corner and there it is Lets here it sing soft or loud It doesn’t matter cause you'll be proud From the top of my head and through my ears It goes around and rings in vain I try so hard every night Writing songs forevery ear to hear It’s so hard It drives me so far Lets make music together for everyone Pen in hand and mind in thought I'll feel that empty place in your heart With music feeling every inch of your body It’s medicine that heals in extra ordinary ways I feel better if I write something great For you to dance to on your first date From the top of my head and through my ears It goes around and rings in vain I try so hard every night Writing songs forever ear to hear It’s so hard It drives me so far
Lyrically this is much better than previous attempts though it felt to shallow for me, the third verse was quite good, but overall, i didn't find anything spectacualr in this poem, but it was an improvement