I agree to disagree what had been said What they told to me had left me sad Came and gone like the wind you brought me in By your side I was there to get you to home Sometime in a place where you once cared When we once stared into the air for a passage in life A life of non-tragic worries and shame I was scared For you It wasn’t true For you I was scared For you It wasn’t fare For you The sky came down over are heads All things around became suddenly sound Missing us the world became a new Who would of thought it would be me left in the dew But not you It wasn’t true The worlds been the same Stuck in a mystical frame I came to save you from its ultimate pain I was scared For you It wasn’t true For you I was scared For you It wasn’t fare For you
Pretty good I can definently say you are getting better the more you write. It flowed fairly well and despite it's reltave shortness it finished off quite nicely.