Revenge Is Sweeter Than A Twenty Second Kiss I never thought it would come to this You and me exchanging fists There’s that ever longing will not to give in As each blow rips out the strength within I hadn’t thought you would have done what you did I never thought that you would dare do this I never thought that when I was a friend to you You’d stab me in the back, I really had no clue But what’s done is done, there’s no turning back As the sun goes down and the sky turns to black In a distant field opposing sides meet To see who can knock their opponent off their feet Blow after blow, kick after kick The Floor turning red from the blood I spit I’ll make you repay with my two fists Cos Revenge is sweeter than a twenty second kiss I know first hand the staredown’s like years But there’s no backing out now, time to face your fears You can’t decide after the end of all this That you wont face up to the consequences You can’t piss off wishing you could turn back time Cos at the end of the day only you decide And your decision was to betray my trust And give into your precious urges of lust I’m sorry for what you’ve got going on in your head But I won’t forgive and I will not forget So its time to step up and face reality Because I guarantee for you no victory Blow after blow, kick after kick The Floor turning red from the blood I spit I’ll make you repay with my two fists Cos Revenge is sweeter than a twenty second kiss Twenty second kiss Twenty seconds to live! There are 206 bones in your body Let’s see how many I can break I didn’t want it this way I didn’t want any suffering I didn’t need this I don’t want this Why the f**k did you do this? Blow after blow, kick after kick The Floor turning red from the blood I spit I’ll make you repay with my two fists Cos Revenge is sweeter than a twenty second kiss They say revenge is a dish best served cold But not colder than betrayal
it's really awesome...totally grabbed me. just one thing, i felt like i was more in a boxing ring than fighting girl my girl in the hall..
It's great... I love the comparison of fighting your girl and being in a boxing ring. Edit: Oops... Wrong comparison then. But great nonetheless.
No no its not about boxing my girl!!!!!!!!!! Its about someone trying it on with my girl... But...um...thanks for the comments
Anyway, I really like the chorus AND WHY DID THE KISS HAVE TO GET LONGER!?!?!?! :'( [/b][/quote] As I said to you before, ten seconds is too short and 30 seconds is about the time to say ''Alrite I can't breathe now'' Thanks for the comments everyone
I liked how it was compatred to boxing your girl..... :whistle: Awsome write, It flowed really well and sounded great. and i loved this line, i don't know what about it, i just really liked it.