Farewell

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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    I am leaving.
    My far goodbye.

    So distant,
    But so long.

    Along the road,
    Into nowhere.

    Into sunsets,
    Far from here.

    Read this now,
    Take it later.

    Show it to,
    All of you.

    Take this heart,
    Take it far.

    For this saddening,
    Is the start.

    Of all to come,
    All to end.
     
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    heshboy

    heshboy Well-Known Member

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    Goodbye. You always do great with getting your message across. So I like it, though you have put together deeper poems.
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    I tried to make this short but with a deeper meaning.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    it short and good ;)
     
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    tremulant

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    you pulled it off
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    oh yeah thanks ppl !!
     
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    Theazninvasion68

    Theazninvasion68 It's like blood to a vampire, our tragic desire. LPA Super VIP

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    :D i really like the poem! 10/10
    Very awsome :D, I like the second and third verse best!
     

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