Hey kid Do you know what my name is? A voice said budding from beneath your feat and through the crest in street I’ll give you clue it doesn’t defeat the meaning of what was It’s too godly to ever be compared to the above It’s number one in this battle I’ve won Driving a nail in through every poetic ear You hear the forgotten name Lost in the depths of the well Fell in looking for the name to believe in Instead of finding what you were in search of You found a tri headed dragon eating a dove The dove was yet to be dead Looking in the path of its head Words revealed what spelled out a great name Out came a name pronounced in reality as Hesh A fresh aroma released from the dragons breath Awoken with the swallowing of the dove You took flight with fright in your eyes you chose Though you tried You couldn’t escape The name cried Calling you back to save its life Mesmerized of chorus in its voice You made a choice to take an unfortunate course Went back for the name playing in its deadly game Shame evolved and dissolved all life Bringing it all to an end The voice disappeared to reveal the name was gone Wondering what was wrong Lost in the memory of a frame You awoke in your bed dripping in the blood of a dove To see your self swallowed again
NIce work hesh. i replied to this before, but the with the change of server my reply was lost. This is some of the best work you've ever done in my eyes, the idea is so original, amazing and breath taking. It is written brilliantly, i absolutely loved it. Keep up this amazing work.