With You

With You

Another lie slips from your lips,
But now I fail to listen,
Your touch like ice on my neck,
These acid tears now glisten,

On my cheek,
On my back,
All these seams start to crack,

Don't lie to me again,
Don't pretend you understood my pain,
This is me with you,

This time you don't see me there,
In the corner on my own,
Why do you get all the love,
As I sit on my loser's throne,

Left to cry,
Left to hurt,
I'll lay your lies in the dirt,

Don't lie to me again,
Don't pretend you understood my pain,
This is me with you,

Don't lie to me again,
Don't pretend you understood my pain,
This is me with you,

With you and I'm dying,
With you and I'm happy,
With you and I hate you,
With you and I love you.

...thoughts please...

 

very interesting

 

I liked it, but it seemed to be repeating it's self to often, which i didn't like. The lyrics are fairly simple and i've seen much better from you.

 

thanks, i've not had much time recently, so i haven't been able to work as hard on my writing...

 

cool tune - could be a bit better with some work put into it