Severed (My World Broke Apart Tonight)

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Severed (My World Broke Apart Tonight)

    Why are we here all alone,
    Left to cry with nothing,
    But our blurred reflection's,
    Should I try to escape from her grasp,
    I'm choking on your words,
    They cut my throat like knives,

    Severed on the inside,
    Severed on the outside,
    My world broke apart tonight,

    All these emotions never felt before,
    I can still recall your taste,
    In my mouth on my lips,
    A heart as cold as the world around,
    Vines entwine themselves with me,
    Living this broken life again,

    Severed on the inside,
    Severed on the outside,
    My world broke apart tonight,

    You ran my veins dry,
    You poisoned my life,
    You set the sky alight,
    You broke my world tonight,

    Severed on the inside,
    Severed on the outside,
    My world broke apart tonight,

    Severed on the inside,
    Severed on the outside,
    Now do you remember,
    What we used to have,
    An elaborate dream called love.


    thoughts please...
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    its ok but could have been better
     
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    Snail

    Snail LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    This is pretty good, although it doesn't quite look as good as your older ones
     

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