Are you trying to feel through about me? By feeding me off into the cannibals. Nothing is going to stop me from thinking about you. Even in my time of stress My conscience hurts these days With nowhere else to go My life feels so boring these days I guess it’s because you’re not here Therefore, I’m in a portrait of you Take back the memories of what we shared Because it still hurts when I think about you anymore! I wonder if you are feeling the same thing that I am Because I can feel it deep inside Can’t you search deep down inside your heart? Instead of scratching your veins You know it’s killing us inside You say you're done with me today But there are some days where I don’t believe you Therefore, I’m in a portrait of you Take back the memories of what we shared Because it still hurts when I think about you anymore! Your making it suffocate Stop the bleeding It's the color black I'm already insane Spin the tops of my fingers off already It never works Because I know you too well You’re trying to see what I can do Who will make the next move?
Y'know.. it was me that sent you off into the cannibal jungle. *hides* Great poem. Choc chip cookies to you.
it was presented in a good flow, but the whole theme didn't appeal to me. i liked the last stanza. something very different in it, i stood out.