Just Like You Imagined

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    a life in ashes

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    Just Like You Imagined

    A dance of death,
    Playground for the mice,
    This life is stone,
    You place a black rose upon my grave,
    Now we say goodbye,

    Lick my wounds to taste my pain,
    Just like you imagined it all comes back again,

    An endless maze,
    The ceiling starts to spin,
    Taste the bloody lips,
    Waking up and feeling numb,
    I'm running in a wheel,

    Lick my wounds to taste my pain,
    Just like you imagined it all comes back again,
    Lick my wounds to taste my pain,
    Just like you imagined it all comes back again,

    What have I learned today,
    Have I held hate a little closer,
    Would it hurt too much to speak,
    Your silence moves us closer,

    Lick my wounds to taste my pain,
    Just like you imagined it all comes back again,
    Lick my wounds to taste my pain,
    Just like you imagined it all comes back again,

    The darkness claims another one,
    All this pressure breaks me down.


    thoughts please...
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    I really like it, it doesn't rhyme, but flows well.

    That was my favourite part.
     
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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Did you write it to NIN's Just like you imagined?

    Very, very good!
     

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