In This Room *new edit*

I've kind of altered this one adding a few new lyrics in...keeping the screaming. Enjoy.

I came in through the door
And you were standing there
Waiting to take his pants off
AND I SCREAMED
WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING?
That's when you came on to me.
With your little fake smile
And your little fake heart
No wonder he wanted to kill you
When you did this now
I CAN'T BELIEVE

And I remember what you used to be
The "cold hard bitch" who wanted to fuck me
You were the one I thought was here
IN THIS ROOM
YOU CHOKE AND DIE ON HIM!

Where are you now?
Still waiting to escape from the enemy
I can feel it
YOU WILL BE THE ONE YOU HATE
THE VERY THING YOU DESPISE
That's when you came on to me
With that little fake smile
With that little fake heart
No wonder he wanted to kill you
When you did this now
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU NOW

And I remember what you used to be
The "cold hard bitch" who wanted to fuck me
You were the one I thought was here
IN THIS ROOM
YOU CHOKE AND DIE ON HIM
And I remember what dirty things you have done
Imprinted in my mind for further reference
You were the one that made me cry
IN THIS ROOM YOU CHOKE AND DIE ON HIM

On and on and on again
I saw you again holding his hand
With the right one up
And the left one down
With the right one up
And the left one down.

And I remember what you used to be
The "cold hard bitch" who wanted to fuck me
You were the one I thought was here
IN THIS ROOM YOU CHOKE AND DIE ON HIM
And I remember what dirty things you have done
Imprinted in my mind for further reference
You were the one that made me cry
IN THIS ROOM
YOU CHOKE AND DIE ON HIM!!!!!!!!!

 

I made a poem with the same name.
Other than that, i dont like it honestly.

 

Ahem. Friskey is in a vengesome mood. I'll just back away slowly without any smart ass comments.

Honestly? Not your best, but still pretty good.