NOTE: This song was inspired from A Perfect Circle. I took some time, to explain in this due dated time, To explain myself, and complete this unfinished rhyme of mine. Hurting like a broken arrow in the head of those accused, Hurt pains those, who find the Devil clearly amused. To take the innocence, and to throw it away like that, Is like saying you are a walking victim to be walked on like a mat. This might not make sense, to those of ill fate, But to walk on these hands, have been relying on hate. To guide the misfortunate, to take the ill ones down, Into the heart of all mistrust, to beat them into the ground. Take me far away from a home I have never loved nor hated, And make it where it was greed plated. Let’s make a war with no one knows the truth, Let’s make a war with innocence isn’t mentioned in the route. Take the truth, and show it to the media, But has to cause more than nation wide hysteria. Give the bombs to that queer, For the enemy is near. The enemy is the one that leads us all, The enemy is the one that started the war. Let’s take their oil and burn down their city, Let’s leave without our hearts just their pity. Now someone just tell me for once, Before they accuse me and go on and pounce. Leave and take all the oil, Let it go before it’s done and leave it to the boil. Nothing is wrong with taking some lives, Nothing is wrong before someone here dies. It’s nothing but your choice, And your voice. Take the peace, and leave innocence at ease, Take the war, it’s you, they ask for, war or peace.
You're getting better. This is beautiful, and a step above from the simple rhymes you used to publish.
I havent seen your work here in a while. This is steps above all your others. You've been working on it I can tell. Well great job.