Train Wreck

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Darcy, Dec 29, 2005.

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    Darcy

    Darcy LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    I've posted this before, but I changed a buttload of things and added a verse, so tell me what you think of the changes, or just the whole thing in general. Whatever.


    Well you tried too hard just to miss
    But your little black book is the wrong place for this
    You've got so many chances to hit
    So don't get distracted by wondering if
    They've got places for people like you
    'Cause I'm not really sure but I'd say if I knew
    But this whole damn world hasn't a clue
    It's the freedom you choose that defines what you do

    Now you live your life out of a box
    But you'd give it all up just to get what you want
    And this lifestyle's all that you've got
    So if you're not concerned well then why would you stop?
    You dig deeper each time you give up
    If you can't understand well then you're out of luck
    And you let it all get in the way
    With a moment of truth gone as fast as it came

    So I locked every door in this place
    Just trying to think that I'm done with this phase
    But you let it get out of your hands
    With that look on your face when the shit hit the fan
    It gets harder each time you forget
    That these deadbeat last words are as good as it gets
    But if you could ditch this date with hell
    Then I'm damn sure that I can forgive pretty well

    So I spent last night on the lawn
    When I woke up in bed I still had my shoes on
    And I said it in chalk on the street
    I wrote, "God what is normal, how can it be me?"
    I'm a child that had to grow up
    And if I can't blame someone then I'll just blame love
    We've got people to thrill, they've got cars that can kill
    And if you can't fix something, then maybe I will
     
    Last edited: Dec 29, 2005
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Beautiful, great flow.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    I have to agree. This was really good. Just awsome. It definently shows that alot of work went into this.
     
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    Darcy

    Darcy LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Aw, thank you both so much for your extremely kind words.
     
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