Bleeding Blood

Bleeding Blood

These words tell a story,
That her picture will not change,
With my blackened heart,
There's hope amongst the pain,
This love's like a drug,
It hurts but I want more,
This poetry, this world I know is cold,
An endless cycle of nothing and blood,

Bleed tonight,
The poison's on her lips,

Silence is perfect for you,
Choking on my words,
I'm drowning and can only hurt myself.


...thoughts please...

 

I likes a lot. But too short imo.

 

This is beautiful, in my opinion it doesn't need to be any longer.

 

Oh yeah... Your face is teh beatiful XD The poem just looks short, but it is great stuff.

 

Where'd that come from? And thank you, I think.

 

I was just being witty you know...Like all the cool kids