Selfish

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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    This might not be done yet, and I know it is quite poor. It served more as a way to let out my thoughts, as well as write somethign in hope's to thwart writers block. Tell me what you think.

    Selfish

    I’m so Selfish
    Thousands of people fall in Iraq
    My friends grandfather had a heart attack
    I don’t know them, so who cares if they die?
    Did you think sob stories would bring a tear to my eye?
    But I still fall into self-pity if something goes wrong
    And wonder why I can’t get along
    With the one person I actually care for
    She’s only a girl but so hard to ignore
    Caused by a chemical imbalance to promote procreation
    Giving people the drive to populate a nation
    So again I feed excuses to myself, it’s not my fault I love you
    Repeat it and repeat it until it comes true
    But what’s the “why” matter, a fact is a fact
    Do I need a reason for how I feel and act?
    Once again I put myself on the defensive
    Trying to find why your reach is so extensive
    So extensive it can grab me in my sleep
    Pull me into a dream where I’d dig six feet deep
    And stay there if it kept you alive
    As a worker bee would die for the hive
    Or die for his Queen, that sounds more accurate
    Like a noble knight standing at the battlements
    But I have no shining armour and my sword is my tongue
    Wrap it around my throat and with it I’m hung
    I pull and cry and wish it would end
    Kiss me or kill me just don’t pretend
    I mean more to you than the ant you just stepped on
    At least it got to die- I have to live on
    But all these pains hold no real significance
    Compared to others in all their magnificence
    But still I sit down and feel sorry for myself
    When I have friends, a family and even my health
    I’m so selfish
     
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    heshboy

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    This is pretty good for writers block.
     
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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Uhm...this is pretty damn good...it's freakin' awesome!...not just for writer's block...dude...seriously...I'm really close to writing another song...seriously...to go with your own feelings and make others (me for instance) think they feel them too...even if just for a few moments...it's really inspiring...maybe it's just me but I love your way of writing...*jumps around in excitement* :thumbsup:
     
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    esaul17

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    I love you for the feedback. However, try to to necropost or you'll get in trouble.
     
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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Uhm...sorry...but...necropost?...sry...my vocabularies gotten smaller...(living in germany for a few years will do that...)
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Necroposting is bumping an old thread. An old thread is one that's gone thirty days without a new post.
     
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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Oh...that...sry...okay...in the future I'll just write you a private message @esaul17 :)
     

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