Sometimes I go back to the black and grey place in my head Where music plays/ I fear it's raising the dead Brain in flames/The music rewinds to replay again If I'm lucky every now and then it stops playing within Am I crazy, because things don't seem to be ok? People say I'm insane when I tell them about the music that plays It's either a game or I'm just fucking insane I know this sounds lame But it seems like things aren't right The music always comes back at the wrong time Death Music (Killing my mind) Death Music (silence my eyes) Death Music (Nowhere to Hide) Death Music (The reason I can't get by) Curousing my eyes and Unlining my Focus Taking me back to that place in my head where all I need is some focus Dazed with the feeling of being doused with wine Music sadenning every little thought that I have I'm left lying broken Puts me in a trance/Confusing my vision What's Real or Not/Whenever I listen Pushing to the limit to flip to the reverse track raising the tension I'm feeling there's only one way to stop this music that plays It was a mistake anyways to start it up in the first place Death Music (Killing my mind) Death Music (silence my eyes) Death Music (Nowhere to Hide) Death Music (The reason I can't get by) People make mistakes and get burned at the stake To put this death music down I couldn't be asleep in my wake I would have to pound everything around that screems missplaced And when this music goes away I can just get by without having to hide/Feeling so confused with lost screws I can't hide I can make up my mind with less stress on my chest Do the things I need to do to get by Killing my mind silence my eyes Nowhere to Hide Killing my mind silence my eyes Nowhere to Hide The reason I can't get by Death Music
Not bad. You commented on all my stuff, so I thought I owed you one back. It had a few rough edges (you rhymed Focus with focus), it wasn't bad. I jsut find there were a few points that the flow and rhyme stuttered. Overall a nice piece with a good meaning.