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    Friskey™

    Friskey™ LPA Super Member LPA Addict

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    This is a reworking of a song I did called "Waiting (When All Is Said And Done)". I left out the screaming and added new lyrics.

    Note: Some of the lyrics meanings are different from what you think I'm saying...trust me.


    You only love me like a brother
    That was the days back then
    After all the things you've done for me
    My life was only going nowhere
    At the end of August
    You were there for me
    When I needed you by my side
    Can this feeling go any further?
    Can you at least try?
    I'm throwing my heart to you
    As you kick it to the bucket

    It's gone away
    Once again this feeling's over
    Cutting you is the only option now
    It's the only thing I can do
    After all is said and done

    Thus I follow you again
    Waiting for the right time to say
    What I have to say
    This is almost
    The perfect time to break
    Once again as always
    I'm a broken mirror
    And I say this
    It's gone away
    Once again this feeling's over
    After all is said and done
    When all is said and done

    Thus I follow you again
    Waiting for the right time to say this now
    And it's the right time
    It's the perfect time to say this to you
    Once again as always
    And I say this
    I fucking hate you

    And I say this...

    It's gone away
    Once again this feeling's over
    Cutting you is the only option now
    It's the only thing I can do
    When all is said and done.
     
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    Holiday

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    ooh, so angry my dear.

    I like it though. It really puts your emotions across. ^_^
     
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    Linja

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    The broken mirror part reminds me of the mirror I broke yesterday. Another job writing well done, Friskey.
     
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    Good job. I am wondering, is this poem about loving and hating a part of yourself? Or am I completely off. The mirror reference and the cutting makes it seem like your dealing with yourself, not another.
     
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    Friskey™

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    It's about one of my former best friends. Way back when she saved my life and we became really close but lately, she's just changed so much. She has become a no good polyamorous child who needs to grow up. It's sad...I've tried so much to let her know that she is going to get hurt...but she doesn't listen to me.
     
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    Linja

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    *garfield hug*
     
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    Friskey™

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    hehe *garfield hug*
     
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    Luke

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    Dude...this deserves no better term than this: Awesomiclyfantasmicalitypticlaityaboulously Good :lol:

    Awesome work man, keep it up :)
     

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