Fragile

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    esaul17

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    Fragile

    Here take it
    No, you can have it
    I want you to
    You’re the only person I could say that to
    Besides, it’s useless if you don’t have it
    Be careful- don’t drop it
    My heart is fragile


    Will you be mine?
    How I’ve longed to ask you
    But I hesitate
    Afraid to unmask you
    Because your response
    Could shatter my world
    Let the seasons bleed together
    As my senses are twirled
    Dizzy and disoriented
    No one to lean on
    I fall alone
    And let my consciousness be gone
    Yet even in my dreams
    I can’t stop falling
    The echo of your words
    Perpetually present, never calling
    An unholy pestilence
    Rotting my mind
    Internal decomposition
    My heart confined
    Floating in liquefied organs
    And blood from burst veins
    Sinking into myself
    Bound in chains
    Liquidate my assets
    My heart cannot be sold
    You wouldn’t take it for free
    My love’s worth its weight in gold
    So I’m terrified of your answer
    I can see how things would go
    Could you ever love me?
    Your reply: No.

    What’s that?
    You don’t need it?
    Don’t *want* it?
    That’s okay I guess
    I’ll hold onto it
    Lock it away
    Oh, would you look at that
    I guess it doesn’t really matter anymore
    It’s broken
     
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    Lilian

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    I don't understand something: at the beginning you say: "it's useless...", and later: "my heart cannot be sold...it's weight in gold". Isn't it contrasting?
     
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    esaul17

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    My heart is useless. My love is worth it's weight in gold. My love is not a physical entity and has no wieght, meaning it is worth nothing. It can't be sold because no one wants it. Thanks for reading my poem. Tell me if that doesn't make any sense.
     
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    Lilian

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    But "Here take it...my heart is fragile" and "My heart cannot be sold you wouldn't take it for free"?
    Heart is related to love. If you give someone your heart means you give him your love. It's almost the same.
     
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    esaul17

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    I realize they are related. Love in itself is weightless though.
     

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